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No 1
Love or Money? Is this some Graded Reader's title? Or some Classic story's? This is a veeeeeery big theme for the first writing class,isn't it ? But, it's very good one to talk about, I think. Let me try!
Well, it's difficult to choose one of the two for me! When we say Love, it would involve money, I think. Oh, I see, Love is the most important thing. If there were no love in this world, no one could live. But If you had no money, we also could not live.This is fact, you see.We cannnot live only with love, and we cannnot only with money, too. Of couse, I show my son,"Love is the best", though, he would learn some day
people are living between ideal and real, and both of them are essential to live. Thanks!

No 2
「Toad get in trouble」
One day, Toad got a air ticket to New York by a lotterly.
Then he went to New York, and went to Starbucks.
He had tasted his first Seattle coffee. But he don't have money. Then he could not pay for his coffee.
Now Toad is a prisoner.
And he wrote letter to Frog for help.
A week later he got a letter from Frog.
And the letter said,
"Sorry, I can not send money.
I don't have any money. Because we don't need money in our world.
I miss you.
Love.
Frog"
Toad sighed, and said himself, "I know he LOVE me. But I need MONEY now."
The end

No 3
I think the love is more important than money. If we have even money ,a child will grow up with healthy spirit? Needless to say, it's no. This is not only human but also animals. A scientist experimented about physical contact. He thought `Which does monkey's baby feel familiar ,the hard robot giving him some milk or the one covered soft cloth which have no milk?` How do you think about? Despite the monkey's baby drunk milk from the hard one, he chose the soft one. Why has it happend? Maybe,he had touched soft cloth and wanted to feel easy. He wanted feeling love after all. The love is very important for all of creature on the earth.

No 4
I want all. Because Mr.Sakai said "All is fair in love and Extensive Reading."

No 5
If your answer is 'love', how about this ?
A woman demanded love from YOU before marriage.
But they got money from YOU at end of marriage ( divorce ).
Or how about this ?
You can sellect your partner from love.
But how about her ?
She sellect YOU form what ?
(If you don't think, you need thinking !)
So, answer is clear, isn't it ?
( This answer was maid for fun, so it is NOT my opinion. )

No 6
When you choose your partner, which is more important, "love" or "money" ?
What a ridiculous question ! Love comes first, no doubt.
The reason ? Because you find love ealier than money in a dictionary.
Oh, sorry for kidding.
To tell the truth, I don't understand the meaning of the question. When
you talk about "love", what comes to your mind ? The lady I love, our dream,
future, family, , , only these things, NOT money. Love makes me forget
money. So, it's hard to compare money with love.
When it comes to marriage, tell me what kind of RICH LADY,
whom I only can love, care about money ?

No 7
I think of the partner. I think we would like to raise love with the partner.

No 8
Title : Money is tool, Love is goal.
Love is more important.
Love makes me more powerful and happy.
Love supports my life.
So I can do hard work, and enjoy skiing and reading many books.
Love has bad aspects.
Love makes me bad if my will is weak.
Money is important.
I need eat foods, have home, and have clothes.
I can buy these things, but I can’t buy “LOVE”.
If I have huge money, there is nothing I cannot buy.
Since I don’t have huge money, I don’t know it.
At least there are many things that I can’t buy.
Money is tool. Love is goal.
After all, Love is more important than money.

No 9
We can't buy love with money. However, we can't buy money with love, either.
We can buy a book with money. And we can also buy money with a book.
Because, it's because we can sell it to a secondhand bookseller.
Therefore, I choose money. It's not independently helpful in love for me, and I don't think that it
wants. I don't think "please love to someone", and I don't want to love someone. Since a thing required for me goes into a hand with money, the money is more important for it than love. However, the book which can be bought with money is more important for me than money. If there is a book and there is money with which we buys a book for the time being, Then, it says. It's not needed for me.

No 10
If you have much money and no love, are you happy?
Or if you have much love and no money, are you happy?
I wonder you think money is more important than love or not.
More and more you get money, more and more you want.
More and more you get love, more and more you want.
I think it's very difficult to be satisfied.
But why do you want much money or much love?
If you want to be happy, I can tell you it's easy.
You can try to find a tiny hapiness in your daily life.
If you can find it, you'll be happier than before.
Let's try!

No 11
Title: Neither love nor money but getting both
I don't choose someone because he has love or money.
They are not supposed to be the conditions to select a lover or a spouse.
I just love him. That's it.
If you love someone because he has something to give you, you will
be disappointed in some way.
Just love him and pray his happiness, and he would work hard
to make a great success.
Then he would give you a heartful love.
This means you could get both love and money in the end.
If not, leave him. He is not worth to love for you. You will lose nothing.
Only thing you need is a confidence that you believe in yourself
that you surely love him. (119 words)

No 12
Love or Money...
Which is the most important thing in the world? You may think love is the most. But I don't think so.
Because lovers betray sometimes, but Money never does . In sickness and in health, money always be with you. There is a golden saying about money. "Money doesn't solve everything, but does almost everything"
This words are made by me just now. (65words)

No 13
Well, well, well, it is a very Japanese sence to think about. To be honest, I am disgusted about it, hahaha.
"Love" and "Money" cannot compare in fact. The both are very important for living, but the exists are quite different. I think "Love" is the most important ingredient, or core of life, and "Money" is just the tool of life.
We have to live our own life, and in fact, money is neccessary to hold our living. So if you concider to get married to someone, you need to check his/her financial condition and it is most important requirement. But if you know how to get it enough for your living, then, no longer you stick to it.
I often feel very sorry for many people who don't know real love. Next time, I will teach you about LOVE! But don't forget, you need some money to learn it from me!!! hahaha (just kidding!)

No 14
Which is more important for you Love or Money?
I think it depends on a person. We want what we don't have.
It means if you haven't got enough money for something to do in your life, your answer would be very simple. Just Money. On the other hand, if you were the member of a very rich family, but nobody loved you, you would choose Love.
Am I? I don't have either of them enough. I want both of them more. Firstly Money.
However I strongly believe the most important is Health.
If you are very fine, it is possible to earn lots of money as you like or to have many lovers as you wish.
It means you have the various possibilities.
You will exactly spend a wonderful life. if you are healthy.

No 15
『My conclusion: money』
I had fallen in love with him since I've first met him.
There was something special about him.
He lived in Iwakuni and I lived in Tokyo.
He couldn't come to Tokyo, because he needed to take care of his pearents.
If I wanted to meet him I had to visit to Iwakuni, and that costed me a lot.
And I always wanted to meet him.
At first I was happy with him.
Then I continued to brame him we didn't met often.
Even when we were together, I thought about money.
I thought I loved him and he loved me.
I lost him because of money.
Love needs money.
It is the way things worked.

No 16
【Which is more important for me, love or money?】
I think the love is more important. If I choose my partner,
I will choose the person who loves me and whom I love, not the ONLY rich person. I can make money for our living. But I can't buy love. I don't like to live with someone whom I hate. It is only a pain for me.
　Does money make me happy? Of course, sometimes do. But I don't need special luxury. For example, I don't want to eat expensive food, because there are some cheap, delicious, safe and fresh food. I want to talk with a happy conversation while we are eating, than to eat luxury meal.

No 17
Love is more important than money, especially when you select your partner. Without money, you can't live with your partner. Without love, you can't STAND to live with your partner.　You can earn money - or make him do it - with power of love to keep your life easy. You, or him, are even willing to do that! Love is the oil for working engines.
Can you live with your loveless millonaire partner although your life without driving you crazy? Sooner or later, you'll spend all his money for shopping, calling on your friends, eating, drinking, and billing to your counselor, then lawyer. You lose all the money AND him! So, believe me. Life is easier with love.

No 18
Which is more important for you Love or Money?
I think Love is more important than Money.
The reason is if you want some money, you can stole them from somewhere or change to something or to cheat someone or to work hard.
You can see there are many sly person in the world when you read newspaper.
But these ways aren’t suitable for Love not at all.
If you want somebody love you, you can’t ask or order to do them.
You have to show them your hart, and you built relationship between them.
After that you may be given love to them.
So Love is a gift.
You want to a Love what you don’t get.
Just one reason, it is enough Love is more important then money

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No 19
To tell the truth, this question seems similar to such a question, “Which is more important me or your job?” Who has a bravery to say anything other than “you” in front of your girlfriend or boyfriend? However, money can solve only 99% of problems around us, not 100%. 1% can be solved only by love. Without money, we are always irritated with errands, such as food, clothes, places where we live and something like that. Besides, without love, we are not worth living. If you meet a girl or boy with the same value with you, especially about money but without enough money, you must think how to get money by yourself during hug for the future.

No 20
I think love is more important than money. I need some money, sure thing. But I don’t need a lot of money. Having some money, I can fill my empty stomach. That’s enough for me. To tell the truth, I need some nice clothes and a comfortable house too. Anyway, it gets much easier to live through hard time if you are with the one you love.
But without love, you must have empty space in your heart. Can money fill your empty space? A lot of Money can buy you a lot of fun and help you forget your empty heart. But it never lasts long. So you need more money to keep yourself busy. But I don’ t think you would have a good result. It doesn’t matter how hard you try. Your emptiness is always with you. Isn’t it pretty sad?

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　こんばんは。ジアスです。

〉No10 神ママ　３票　優秀賞

　わーい！わーい！わーい！わーい！わーい！
　実はNo10が私でした。
　マリコさんのおかげ(？)で優秀賞をいただけたみたいです。
　ありがとうございます！

　日常の中で小さな幸せを積み重ねていくことは、多読の継続と同じで長くHappyで
ある秘訣だろう、というのは嫁さんとも意見の一致していることなので、実は書きや
すいテーマでした。今夜も結婚記念日を前に「めぐり逢い」なんていうしっとりとした
映画を見ながらそんな話をしていたところです。

　実はThe more〜, the more〜がなぜか思いつかなかったのです。「なんか他に
表現があったはず.....なんかしっくりこないな〜」と思っていたのですが、
やはり(爆)
　いったん日本語の、それも単語から引きずられた表現はやはりダメ、英語の最小単位は
文だ、と酒井先生が講義でおっしゃられたのがよくわかった気がします。

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　秘かに憧れていたマグカップがいただけるなんてむっちゃ感激です！
　メールはすでに別便で送りました。よろしくお願いします。

近眼の独眼龍です

ちょっとストレスが溜まることがあって、鬱々とした気分だったので、
元気でももらおうかとSSS掲示板をみたら、あらま、ビックリ。

元気だけじゃなくって、喜びとマグカップ（わぁーい）まで
もらえちゃった。本当に嬉しいです。ありがとうございます。

〉No 6 神神ま　３票　優秀賞

これが、わたくしのでした。ジアスさんのように、しみじみと
愛や幸せを妻と語らうこともないので、おちゃらけて書きました。
ただ、時間がなかったので ある意味必死でもありましたけど。
そのわりに10分近くかかっちゃったかもしれない。

残念だったのは、英文だけじゃ分からないかもしれないと思って
和訳をつけたんですけど、その和訳しているときに 英文に追加して
しまった単語がdreamの前の"our"と最後の方のonly。 両方とも
おかしいって酒井先生に指摘されちゃいました。

下手な考え休むに似たりですね。書きなぐったままで送ればよかった。
その方が"多読的英文"だったようですね。

ま、反省はあんまり似合わないので、とにかく嬉しい近眼の独眼龍
でした。

こんにちは、モーリンです。
最優秀賞を頂き、ありがとうございました。
課題に対するアプローチがちょっと違ったので、受け入れて頂けるか心配でした。
審査員の皆様、ありがとうございました。
ところで、賞品のマグカップは、やはり私の推進しているものでしょうか(笑)。

今回の作品は、３ヶ月前に書いた Toad ものが完成してなかったので、Toad もの
でいってみました。ニューヨークは、友達が行きたいと言うので格安チケットを
インターネットで調べたら、友達が心変わりして中止。ニューヨークで１００万語通過
なんて淡い夢を見てたのに、ああがっかり。それでニューヨークが頭から離れません
でした。そして、ニューヨークといえばマンハッタンに４００店舗あるという
スターバックスということになりました。
"for help" は意識してなかったのですが、酒井先生に英語らしいと評価されて
うれしかったです。それに、どうせ答えは出ないという辺りを表現したかったので、
それも理解して頂いてよかったです。

では最後に Toad の後日談を。

「Toad got in trouble again」
One month later, Toad could get out the prison.
But he was still in New York without money.
Because his air ticket was already expired.
Toad sighed again, "It's too difficult to live in the real world."

Fin.

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