Re: I gave it a try but it was so tough!!

Hello, Kian-san.  May is speaking.

〉A few days ago, I tried to make lines for the book and to rhyme them.
〉It was so tough!!
*** I can imagine how hard it is to make a rhyme・・・ we need a good vocabulary, correct pronunciation, and a lot of imagination.

〉And we figured that reading rhyme was easy but writing it was difficult.
*** Indeed!  I tried it myself, and realized it was really difficult.
This is what I did.  

   I walk with Sancho, my little lovely dog.
   Rain or shine; even in the fog.
      We walk through woods in the frosty park.
      We walk with stars at night so dark.
   When I throw his ball in the field,
   He runs and jumps at it never to yield.
      He often puts his head on my laps at ease.
      I feel his warmness, patting him to please. 

I hope you like it.

Happy holidays!!

 

〉Hello, Kian-san. May is speaking.

Hello, May-san! This is Kian.
Thank you for answering me!!

I walk with Sancho, my little lovely dog.
〉 Rain or shine; even in the fog.
〉 We walk through woods in the frosty park.
〉 We walk with stars at night so dark.
〉 When I throw his ball in the field,
〉 He runs and jumps at it never to yield.
〉 He often puts his head on my laps at ease.
〉 I feel his warmness, patting him to please.

I like it very very much!!
You are a poet!

Here are my lines.
It is not so good but will you read it, please?

Miffy's Dream

Miffy is on a cloud.
It is a nice cloud.
She is floating in the sky.
She has a wonderful sight.
Where dees the cloud take Miffy?
Miffy meets Taffy.
They are facing each other.
They are floating together.
They are floating to the stars.
Now, they are playing with the stars.
Miffy and Taffy find shooting-stars.
They ride on the shooting-stars.
Oh, there is the moon.
We are coming soon.
The cresent is a slide.
They are happy and sigh.
It is getting colder.
They hold their shoulders,
Miffy and Taffy sleep happily together.

My teacer's one is much better, of course.
But he needed much time to correct mine.
So making a rhyme is very very difficult!

〉Happy holidays!!

You, too!!

Hi, Kian-san. This is May.
It was freezingly cold today. How are you?

How lovely your passage is!
I have never looked at Miffy's Dream (I've read many other Miffy books, though), but when I read your lines, I could imagine the story・・・ what Miffy did in her dream and how she enjoyed the trip on a cloud.

Your lines remind me of my childhood.
When I was a small girl, I often flew in the sky in my dreams・・・　sometimes on a cloud, and sometimes with my own wings.
And those days I really believed I could fly .

Have nice dreams!

May

〉Hi, Kian-san. This is May.
〉It was freezingly cold today. How are you?

Hi, May-san. Kian is speaking.
Yes, it was cold today, but I enjoyed myself all day.

〉How lovely your passage is!
〉I have never looked at Miffy's Dream (I've read many other Miffy books, though), but when I read your lines, I could imagine the story・・・ what Miffy did in her dream and how she enjoyed the trip on a cloud.

I am really glad to hear that.
Thank you!!
But I called the Miffy's friend Taffy to rhyme...

〉Your lines remind me of my childhood.
〉When I was a small girl, I often flew in the sky in my dreams・・・　sometimes on a cloud, and sometimes with my own wings.
〉And those days I really believed I could fly .

I can imagine how lovely you were in your childhood!
And I hope all children can fly in their deames.

〉Have nice dreams!

Thank you! I am sure I am going to have a nice dream tonight!
Happy Reading!!