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773. The Ugly Frog Prince - second episode
お名前: モーリン
投稿日: 2005/9/10(10:46)
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Hi. This is Moring.
I worry if someone had read my previous writing.
Any way I have written second one.
The Ugly Frog Prince - second episode
The ugly prince's heart is squeezing.
He cannot forget the pretty little princess.
He thinks, "If only I was an ugly frog, she likes me very much."
Then he visits the mean witch.
But the mean witch is always mean.
So she doesn't like the prince become happy.
She turns him to an ugly toad.
The ugly prince is an ugly "toad" prince now.
The ugly toad is uglier than the ugly frog.
He is very sad. But now, he cannot anything but swim. And he thinks
if he cannot marry the little pretty princess, he wants to live near
her. Then he swims to a pond near the castle that she lives.
One day the little pretty princess go to a pond near her castle as
usual with her Nanna. And she finds a little ugly creature at the pond.
It's a toad. She likes it very much because ugly. Then she catches
it and brings it to her castle. She likes this toad very much.
Of cause she doesn't know who it is. And you know it is the ugly prince.
The little pretty princess feed him every morning, afternoon, and
evening. Also she is with him and talks to him all time.
The ugly toad prince is very happy now.
And they live happily ever after.
But do you know? Actually a toad's lifetime is not so long.
Happy Reading & Write a message to the author!
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お名前: いづこ
投稿日: 2005/9/10(22:31)
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Mr. Moring, thank you for the nice stories.
I am Izuko. I have been a big fan of your stories.
First of all, do you know me?
I changed my HN the other day.
I once wrote the second episode of your story,
and expected the third episode by somebody else,
but no one came.
The story stopped.
It was two years ago?
Today I enjoyed your new stories very much.
It seems that they have the third episode.
And more, probably.
I expect a few new characters to appear in the next story,
and your writing will go long.
Or the witch will become much meaner.
(sounds like a childish fan letter?)
〉But do you know? Actually a toad's lifetime is not so long.
Oh, what will come next.
I can't wait...
Happy Writing!
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Hi Izuko-san. This is Moring.
〉I have been a big fan of your stories.
Thank you.
〉I once wrote the second episode of your story,
〉and expected the third episode by somebody else,
〉but no one came.
〉The story stopped.
Oh, now I know who you are. LTNS.
I know you were thinking change your HN.
But I don't know when you had changed it.
〉It was two years ago?
Almost. I think just after the first TADOKIST TAIKAI.
〉Today I enjoyed your new stories very much.
Thank you very much.
Actually I'm reading the original version of Little Princess now.
This is excellent. And the sentences are elegant.
I am inspired. Then I start making story again.
〉It seems that they have the third episode.
〉And more, probably.
Now I'm making third one. But this is not third episode.
Because the toad's lifetime is not so long.
〉I expect a few new characters to appear in the next story,
〉and your writing will go long.
I hope so.
〉Or the witch will become much meaner.
〉(sounds like a childish fan letter?)
Ha ha!
〉Oh, what will come next.
〉I can't wait...
Coming soon!
Happy Reading & Writing!
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776. Re: The Ugly Frog Prince - third episode
お名前: バナナ
投稿日: 2005/9/13(00:15)
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Hello, This is Banana.
I like your stories.
So I try to write next story.
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The Ugly Toad Prince
The ugly toad price is happy.
Because the little pretty princess likes him, loves him.
One day, she thinks the ugly toad (prince) is very ugly, so is very cute.
She wants to kiss it (him).
The ugly toad notices she kisses him.
He is very happy, but he thinks what it cause.
So he jumps and run from her kiss.
She is not happy now.
Because the cute ugly toad doesn't want to kiss her.
The ugly toad is annoyed like Hamlet.
'To be or not to be kissed ? That is the question.'
( Please don't ask me why like Hamlet. Me dun know.)
Ummmmmmm.
He is ugly.
He is a ugly toad.
He is a ugly cute toad for the little princess
And now, he is a ugly, cute and annoyed toad.
What a toad!
-FIN-
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Thank you for your reading.
Bye-bye.
Banana.
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777. The Ugly Frog Prince - Fourth Episode
お名前: バナナ
投稿日: 2005/9/13(19:31)
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Hello, This is Banana. This Fourth episode is after 'The third episode'. Please read it if you have a time. ===================================================== The Ugly Frog Prince - Fourth Episode : Thinking - The ugly toad prince is annoyed. The little pretty princess wants to kiss him. But if so, he becomes a uglier human being. And if so, she hates him. He doesn't be hated. 'What should I do ?' He thinks days and nights. At last he has a good idea! (Choose one from the followings. Choose the best you like to read.) (a)The idea is .... 1.He doesn't wash his mouth for a month. 2.His mouth smell very bad. 3.So, she doesn't want to kiss him. (b)The idea is ..... 1.He pretends that he is a girl toad. 2.He train himself very hardly. 3.So,he can walk like a girl toad ( with hip-shaking ), eat like a girl toad ( with little-open-mouth ) and do many stuff. 4.She doesn't want to kiss a girl toad. (c)The idea is ..... 1.He notices when she kisses she closes her eyes. 2.He can get a worm easily near the pond. 3.So when she wants to kiss, when she closes her eyes, he gets a proper worm quickly and put it on her lips. When her kiss is at end and her eyes is open, he hides the worm that has a kiss-mark on its body. (d)The idea is .... 1.It is good that he becomes good-looking. 2.He goes to SEIKEI-GEKA. 3.He changes his human-being-face to more handsome. 4.Surely it costs a big bucks, but he earns ( the way of Toad ). 5.Then he returns to the little pretty princess, and he accepts her kiss. 6.If it works well, he can get her kisses! ( You choose one, please tell me. Then I make a next story. ) ================================================================= Bye-bye Banana
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778. Re: The Ugly Frog Prince - Fourth Episode
お名前: モーリン
投稿日: 2005/9/13(20:34)
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Hi Banana-san.
Thank you for writing following storie of mine.
I will vote the selection of nextstories.
I think (d) is best.
〉(d)The idea is ....
〉 1.It is good that he becomes good-looking.
〉 2.He goes to SEIKEI-GEKA.
〉 3.He changes his human-being-face to more handsome.
〉 4.Surely it costs a big bucks, but he earns ( the way of Toad ).
〉 5.Then he returns to the little pretty princess,
〉 and he accepts her kiss.
〉 6.If it works well, he can get her kisses!
... Oh! No! No!
He cannot take surgery as a human being before he will got kiss from the little princess.
Oh! But if a surgeon was a beatiful young lady, she can turn him to a human being by her kiss.
But this is not so funny.
Then I'll change my choice to (a).
Please write funny one.
I'm quite busy in this two days.
Happy Reading & Writing.
Moring
〉This Fourth episode is after 'The third episode'.
〉Please read it if you have a time.
〉=====================================================
〉The Ugly Frog Prince - Fourth Episode : Thinking -
〉The ugly toad prince is annoyed.
〉The little pretty princess wants to kiss him.
〉But if so, he becomes a uglier human being. And if so, she hates him.
〉He doesn't be hated.
〉'What should I do ?'
〉He thinks days and nights.
〉At last he has a good idea!
〉(Choose one from the followings. Choose the best you like to read.)
〉(a)The idea is ....
〉 1.He doesn't wash his mouth for a month.
〉 2.His mouth smell very bad.
〉 3.So, she doesn't want to kiss him.
〉(b)The idea is .....
〉 1.He pretends that he is a girl toad.
〉 2.He train himself very hardly.
〉 3.So,he can walk like a girl toad ( with hip-shaking ),
〉 eat like a girl toad ( with little-open-mouth )
〉 and do many stuff.
〉 4.She doesn't want to kiss a girl toad.
〉(c)The idea is .....
〉 1.He notices when she kisses she closes her eyes.
〉 2.He can get a worm easily near the pond.
〉 3.So when she wants to kiss, when she closes her eyes,
〉 he gets a proper worm quickly and put it on her lips.
〉 When her kiss is at end and her eyes is open,
〉 he hides the worm that has a kiss-mark on its body.
〉( You choose one, please tell me. Then I make a next story. )
〉=================================================================
〉Bye-bye
〉 Banana
〉
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Hello!
〉Then I'll change my choice to (a).
OK.No problem.
〉Please write funny one.
〉I'm quite busy in this two days.
I see.
I make it from now.
Wait a day ( the way of Irish.)
〉Happy Reading & Writing.
〉Moring
Bye bye
Banana
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779. Re: The Ugly Frog Prince - after second episode
お名前: バナナ
投稿日: 2005/9/13(21:53)
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Hi, This is Banana.
I made this episode after Moring's second episode.
Now, I start.
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The Ugly Frog Prince : How She Knew The Truth.
- the fifth episode after Moring's second episode.
The little princess and the ugly toad ( used to be a Frog ) prince live happily.
But as Moring says , A toad doesn't have a long lifetime.
Time passes.
Seasons passes.
Winter comes.
And the ugly toad is weak now,
his life seems to disappear now.
The little pretty princess is sad, very sad, but just sad.
Because she just like the little ugly toad, not love it.
At last, he doesn't breathe.
He dies.
She makes a OHAKA for it near the pond where she found the toad.
Winter comes.
Snow falls.
The little pretty princess plays inside now.
She plays a girl-toy, forgetting the toad.
Because she is just a litte girl.
Winter passes.
As time passes, she is grown-up a little.
Snow dissappears.
She can see the OHAKA of the toad.
She remembers the toad.
She goes to the pond, to the OHAKA.
When she is at the OHAKA, she finds a man.
He looks the OHAKA of the toad.
He preys for it.
She knows him.
'He is the king of neighbor country.....'
Then , just at that time,
she knows.
She knows the truth.
She knows that the king preys for his son who used to be a ugly frog.
She knows that the toad was the frog and the prince.
She remember the way that the toad runs from her kiss with a sad face.
She know the truth.
She cryes silently.
Her tears runs on her cheek, drop from her cheek, to the ground, through it, at last reach to the body of the dead toad in the OHAKA.
Then, in the ground, the body of the toad shakes.
And he returns alive.
The little-grown-up pretty princess gets him ( not 'it' now for her ).
She kisses him.
The uglier prince is supprised, because she kisses him - a uglier human being. So he knows she knew the truth. He is very happy.
Then they hear a song, joyful song that is song by toads in the pond.
Toads sing very loudly, because they just wake up from long-enough-TOUMIN.
Toads sleep in winter like they are dead as the ugly toad is dead when the winter comes.
And toads wake up in spring as the ugly toad wakes up.
Do you think the little-grown-up pretty princess's tear make a miracle ? Or do you think the toad sleep TOUMIN as normal toads do?
Anyway, the little-grown-up pretty princess and the uglier human prince live happily ever after.
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Bye-bye
Banana
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781. Re: The Ugly Frog Prince - after second episode
お名前: モーリン
投稿日: 2005/9/13(22:27)
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Hi Banana-san.
This is Moring.
I'm eating dinner now.
I'm reading your story now.
This is realy good.
Good job!
Thank you.
See you soon.
Happy Reading & Writing!
Moring