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お名前: バナナ
投稿日: 2004/12/27(22:32)
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Hello.
This is Banana.
I wrote a message on BBS of 本のことなんでも.
It is the following.
[url:http://www.seg.co.jp/cgi-bin/kb7.cgi?b=sss-paperbacks&c=e&id=511]
If you have comments or if you have a recommend ,
please tell me.
It is OK whether you reply on this BBS or on BBS of 本のことなんでも.
Thank you for your reading this TOUKOU.
Bye-bye
Banana
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649. Re: About style of writng
お名前: モーリン
投稿日: 2005/1/2(19:04)
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A Happy New Year! Banana-san.
This is Moring.
〉I wrote a message on BBS of 本のことなんでも.
I had read this message.
〉If you have comments or if you have a recommend ,
〉please tell me.
I also had read "The Curious Incident of the dog in the midnight".
This book is for grownups, because it includes words related sex.
But almost sentences are very short and easy except talking phrases of grownups.
I think use short sentences for writing statements is good idea for practice.
Because a long sentence is build up with short sentences.
Then next step is making long sentence with easy words.
"Wonderful Wisard of OZ" is include many long sentences with easy words.
Reading this book also should be good practice for writing.
Any way, Happy reading & Happy Writing in this year too.
See you.
Moring