Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

Hi, Chikuwa-san！This is Kian.

〉☆ Five-line poem ☆

〉＊Example１＊
〉Lunchtime ← 1行目　話題を１語で
〉Happy faces ← ２行目　２語を加える
〉Eating, talking, laughing ← ３行目　３語で描写する
〉Time Passes so quickly ← ４行目　気持ちを４語で
〉Wonderful ← ５行目　話題を１語でまとめる

It's fun, fun, fun! I like it!

Chikuwa
With cheese
Ane with cucumbers
Oh, I want beer
Enjoy

Typhoon
Wind circle
Very strong rain
Scary and threatening us
Coming

Flowers
Beautiful, cute
So many colors
They can heal me
Love

Ummmm.....I can't be a poet...ha ha ha...
But it was fun, I enjoyed it.
Thank you for suggesting it to us

Happy Writing!

Hellooo〜〜！！ Kian-san! Thank you for coming!

〉〉☆ Five-line poem ☆

〉It's fun, fun, fun! I like it!

Oh, do you? Thank you very much〜！

〉Chikuwa
〉With cheese
〉Ane with cucumbers
〉Oh, I want beer
〉Enjoy

Wow! Thank you!
I am very happy to be in a poem by other person (not by me).

〉Typhoon
〉Wind circle
〉Very strong rain
〉Scary and threatening us
〉Coming

Timely poem,isn't it?
So your poem sounds very real, or lively...,
sorry I don't find a good word.


〉Flowers
〉Beautiful, cute
〉So many colors
〉They can heal me
〉Love

Wow pretty girlsh poem!
(Does this word↑"girlish" have a good meaning? I hope so.)
I am now in the feeling of girls,
because I am reading one of Jackqueline Wilson books. (Distbin Baby〜)

〉Ummmm.....I can't be a poet...ha ha ha...

I think you are a great poet! You made three nice poems so quickly!

〉But it was fun, I enjoyed it.
〉Thank you for suggesting it to us

I am very happy you like it.

And my new one here.

Nagoya
And Osaka
Not so far
Want to come for
Picture books!

Ha,ha,ha〜　Out of the rule! Never mind!
There is no rule but exceptions.
It is OK if my feeling gets to Kian-san and Osaka people.

〉Happy Writing!

Happy Writing!

Hi, Chikuwa-san! This is Kian.

Thank you for your reply and a new poem!

〉Nagoya
〉And Osaka
〉Not so far
〉Want to come for
〉Picture books!

Enjoy!
Picture books
You and us
As soon as possible
Together!

Sea
Comfortable sound
Full of creatures
Mother of all people
Cradle

Happy Writing!