Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

Hello, Ms.Chikuwa!
This is Takoyaki the Second, a poem-writing Japanese food.


〉＊Example１＊
〉Lunchtime ← 1行目　話題を１語で
〉Happy faces ← ２行目　２語を加える
〉Eating, talking, laughing ← ３行目　３語で描写する
〉Time Passes so quickly ← ４行目　気持ちを４語で
〉Wonderful ← ５行目　話題を１語でまとめる


Fum, fum, fum …


〉＊Example２＊
〉Pictures
〉Old friends
〉Yumi, Ken, Mark
〉Now so far away
〉Time


Oh!
I like this poem.


〉＊Chikuwa’s Tries＊
〉Floppy
〉Kipper’s Friend
〉Run and run
〉Don’t chase the rabbit!
〉Cute!


I haven't read ORT books yet.
But with your poem I can see in my mind a picture.
Floppy is running after a rabbit 〜♪


〉Chikuwa
〉Bamboo ring? (←おひおひ？)
〉Soft and swingy
〉A little bit salty
〉Yummy!


Ahahahhahahhahahhah
I looooooove this !!!!!


〉A school English Textbook introduces this type(style) of poem.
〉Isn’t it fun?
〉It doesn’t take much time.
〉I think it makes good practice to think of words about one subject.


It seems to be fun!
I'll try it.


Takoyaki
Tako Tako
KORO KORO KORO
Where is he going?
Hole


Uuuuummmmm
“Hole” is not “まとめ.”


Reading
Easy Books
Pictures and Rhymes
It is very fun
Happy


OK?
Is it a poem?


Happy Writing 〜♪

Hello, Takoyaki the Second-san.
Thank you for your reply!


〉This is Takoyaki the Second, a poem-writing Japanese food.

I like your title (title?),”a poem-writing Japanese food”.
I want something like that. Let me see…
Oh, I am also “a poem-writing Japanese food”!
No, no, it’s an act of stealing. I may be called Chikuwa, the Pakurist.

I’m glad you enjoy this style of poem.


〉Takoyaki
〉Tako Tako
〉KORO KORO KORO
〉Where is he going?
〉Hole

〉Uuuuummmmm
〉“Hole” is not “まとめ.”

Super! I can feel the enjoyable rhythm.
I also feel the Japanese style of “Happening, Continuing,, Changing, and Ending (起承転結).
I can imagine your moving and the stop.
The 1st line and the 2nd line <TAKOyaki &#8211; TAKO,>
and the 2nd line and the 3rd line <taKO &#8211; Koro>
They make a chain of rhythm, and the phrase “Where is he going?” makes the poem flow.
And with the last line “Hole” I feel sudden stop and “falling”. “Falling” is OCHI.
Too perfect…
Putting aside the reasons(リクツ), it’s simply funny! Gyahahahahahahhahahah
….geho, geho, geho

〉Reading
〉Easy Books
〉Pictures and Rhymes
〉It is very fun
〉Happy

It’s also a nice poem.
I feel like singing this poem as a song!
Mmmm… How about the melody of “The Alphabet?”
Let me try.

♪Rea-ding ( A B ) Easy Books ( C D ) Pictures and Rhymes ( E F G )
It is very fun ( H I J K ) Ha-ppy ( L M N ) ♪　　

Repeating 3 times, you come to the end of the song, but it’s not very good…

Any good melody? I try to think some more time. I want to sing your poem!

〉Happy Writing 〜♪
Yeah, Happy Writing〜♪