Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

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333. Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

お名前: チクワ
投稿日: 2004/8/29(23:36)

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Hellooo〜〜!! Kian-san! Thank you for coming!

〉〉☆ Five-line poem ☆

〉It's fun, fun, fun! I like it!

Oh, do you? Thank you very much〜!

〉Chikuwa
〉With cheese
〉Ane with cucumbers
〉Oh, I want beer
〉Enjoy

Wow! Thank you!
I am very happy to be in a poem by other person (not by me).

〉Typhoon
〉Wind circle
〉Very strong rain
〉Scary and threatening us
〉Coming

Timely poem,isn't it?
So your poem sounds very real, or lively...,
sorry I don't find a good word.


〉Flowers
〉Beautiful, cute
〉So many colors
〉They can heal me
〉Love

Wow pretty girlsh poem!
(Does this word↑"girlish" have a good meaning? I hope so.)
I am now in the feeling of girls,
because I am reading one of Jackqueline Wilson books. (Distbin Baby〜)

〉Ummmm.....I can't be a poet...ha ha ha...

I think you are a great poet! You made three nice poems so quickly!

〉But it was fun, I enjoyed it.
〉Thank you for suggesting it to us

I am very happy you like it.

And my new one here.

Nagoya
And Osaka
Not so far
Want to come for
Picture books!

Ha,ha,ha〜 Out of the rule! Never mind!
There is no rule but exceptions.
It is OK if my feeling gets to Kian-san and Osaka people.

〉Happy Writing!

Happy Writing!


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