Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

Hello, Takoyaki the Second-san.
Thank you for your reply!


〉This is Takoyaki the Second, a poem-writing Japanese food.

I like your title (title?),”a poem-writing Japanese food”.
I want something like that. Let me see…
Oh, I am also “a poem-writing Japanese food”!
No, no, it’s an act of stealing. I may be called Chikuwa, the Pakurist.

I’m glad you enjoy this style of poem.


〉Takoyaki
〉Tako Tako
〉KORO KORO KORO
〉Where is he going?
〉Hole

〉Uuuuummmmm
〉“Hole” is not “まとめ.”

Super! I can feel the enjoyable rhythm.
I also feel the Japanese style of “Happening, Continuing,, Changing, and Ending (起承転結).
I can imagine your moving and the stop.
The 1st line and the 2nd line <TAKOyaki &#8211; TAKO,>
and the 2nd line and the 3rd line <taKO &#8211; Koro>
They make a chain of rhythm, and the phrase “Where is he going?” makes the poem flow.
And with the last line “Hole” I feel sudden stop and “falling”. “Falling” is OCHI.
Too perfect…
Putting aside the reasons(リクツ), it’s simply funny! Gyahahahahahahhahahah
….geho, geho, geho

〉Reading
〉Easy Books
〉Pictures and Rhymes
〉It is very fun
〉Happy

It’s also a nice poem.
I feel like singing this poem as a song!
Mmmm… How about the melody of “The Alphabet?”
Let me try.

♪Rea-ding ( A B ) Easy Books ( C D ) Pictures and Rhymes ( E F G )
It is very fun ( H I J K ) Ha-ppy ( L M N ) ♪　　

Repeating 3 times, you come to the end of the song, but it’s not very good…

Any good melody? I try to think some more time. I want to sing your poem!

〉Happy Writing 〜♪
Yeah, Happy Writing〜♪