Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

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325. Re: How about this? ( For Writing I )

お名前: たこ焼
投稿日: 2004/8/28(16:42)

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Hello, Ms.Chikuwa!
This is Takoyaki the Second, a poem-writing Japanese food.


〉*Example1*
〉Lunchtime ← 1行目 話題を1語で
〉Happy faces ← 2行目 2語を加える
〉Eating, talking, laughing ← 3行目 3語で描写する
〉Time Passes so quickly ← 4行目 気持ちを4語で
〉Wonderful ← 5行目 話題を1語でまとめる


Fum, fum, fum …


〉*Example2*
〉Pictures
〉Old friends
〉Yumi, Ken, Mark
〉Now so far away
〉Time


Oh!
I like this poem.


〉*Chikuwa’s Tries*
〉Floppy
〉Kipper’s Friend
〉Run and run
〉Don’t chase the rabbit!
〉Cute!


I haven't read ORT books yet.
But with your poem I can see in my mind a picture.
Floppy is running after a rabbit 〜♪


〉Chikuwa
〉Bamboo ring? (←おひおひ?)
〉Soft and swingy
〉A little bit salty
〉Yummy!


Ahahahhahahhahahhah
I looooooove this !!!!!


〉A school English Textbook introduces this type(style) of poem.
〉Isn’t it fun?
〉It doesn’t take much time.
〉I think it makes good practice to think of words about one subject.


It seems to be fun!
I'll try it.


Takoyaki
Tako Tako
KORO KORO KORO
Where is he going?
Hole


Uuuuummmmm
“Hole” is not “まとめ.”


Reading
Easy Books
Pictures and Rhymes
It is very fun
Happy


OK?
Is it a poem?


Happy Writing 〜♪


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